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Beginning to understand the importance of the Book of Life, the village leader instructed everyone to begin construction of [[Creation Hall]] based schematics found within new pages of the Book. This building, once complete, became the sanctuary of the Book of Life and a holy spot of worship for the Raposa settlement. Over time, more pages began to fill the Book, and the Raposa followed the new doctrine understanding it as the holy word of the Creator.  
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Beginning to understand the importance of the Book of Life, the village leader instructed everyone to begin construction of [[Creation Hall]] based schematics found within new pages of the Book. This building, once complete, became the sanctuary of the Book of Life and a holy spot of worship for the Raposa settlement. Over time, more pages began to fill the Book, and the Raposa followed the new doctrine understanding it the holy word of the Creator.  
 
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As the village expanded with new landmarks, Veila and her peers became perplexed by the schematics of a final creation: a wood and iron pedestal the Raposa had constructed at the center of their village. Though the schematics portrayed the box alight with flame, all attempts to kindle a fire within it failed as powerful gusts of wind would soon after extinguish all efforts. With the village exhausted of ideas, Veila trepidatiously tore the page for fire from the Book of Life and rested it within the pedestal. To the astonishment of everyone, the page suddenly ignited and burned as a brilliant white flame that soon thereafter shot into the heavens as a beacon of fire.
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As the village expanded with new landmarks, Veila and her peers became perplexed by the schematics of a final creation: a wood and iron pedestal the Raposa had constructed at the center of their village. Though the schematics portrayed the box alight with flame, all attempts to kindle a fire within it failed as powerful gusts of wind would soon-after extinguish all efforts. With the village exhausted of ideas, Veila trepidatiously tore the page for fire from the Book of Life and rested it within the pedestal. To the astonishment of her and the village, the page suddenly ignited, burning a brilliant white flame before the crowd that soon thereafter shot into the heavens as a beacon of fire.  
  
 
=== The Eternal Flame ===
 
=== The Eternal Flame ===

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