Fanon:Veila - Revision history

BakiDance: DYLAN DUDE DREW MY GIRL

2022-09-13T21:23:27Z

DYLAN DUDE DREW MY GIRL

BakiDance: THIRSTY PLANT DREW MY GIRL

2022-09-13T21:17:47Z

THIRSTY PLANT DREW MY GIRL

BakiDance at 04:31, 24 June 2022

2022-06-24T04:31:04Z

BakiDance at 04:04, 23 June 2022

2022-06-23T04:04:47Z

BakiDance: /* The Codex Perditus */

2022-06-20T08:42:30Z

The Codex Perditus

BakiDance: /* The Book of Life */

2022-06-20T08:35:12Z

The Book of Life

BakiDance at 08:23, 20 June 2022

2022-06-20T08:23:41Z

BakiDance at 08:21, 20 June 2022

2022-06-20T08:21:29Z

BakiDance at 08:19, 20 June 2022

2022-06-20T08:19:50Z

BakiDance: rewrite pt 3

2022-06-20T08:18:04Z

rewrite pt 3

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 == {{Icon|Gallery}} Gallery ==
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 thirstyplant_moon.png|By: Thirsty_Plant
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 == {{Icon|Gallery}} Gallery ==
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 IdentityQuest_Veila_Book.png|By: IdentityQuest
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 <!-- The simplest of light spells are now beyond me; the most inept of magicians are above me. \ My legacy died with my first death; as it shall. -->

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 === The Codex Perditus ===
 <p style="padding-left: 10px;">
-Taking the Book of Life back to her home in [[Gearworks]], Veila begun the process of creating the spellbook. With the book bound, all that was left was to transfer the magic from the extracted pages into the empty Codex. Though she had taken precautions and started slow, the magic from the combined pages were far more powerful than she estimated. Her soul was overpowered and she quickly lost control over the unstable enchantment as she tried desperately to halt the binding process.
+Taking the Book of Life back to her home in [[Gearworks]], Veila begun the process of creating the spellbook. With the book bound, all that was left was to transfer the magic from the extracted pages into the empty Codex. Though she had taken precautions and started slow, the magic from the combined pages was far more powerful than she had estimated. Her soul was overpowered and she quickly lost control over the unstable enchantment as she tried desperately to halt the binding process.
 </p>
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-The infusion spell backfired. Fueled by the excess magic of the [[Book of Life]], the effect of the binding was amplified. Rather than just absorbing the magic from the few pages, the Codex Perditus absorbed all that was around it, including Veila's soul. By the time the spell concluded, the Codex became hyper-saturated. Composed of more magic than matter, the object became too unstable to remain fixed to the physical realm and vanished into the [[Fanon:Primordial Void|Void]], taking what little remained of Veila along with it.
+The infusion spell backfired. Fueled by the excess magic of the [[Book of Life]], the effect of the binding was amplified. Rather than just absorbing the magic from the few pages, the Codex Perditus absorbed all that surrounded  it, including Veila's soul. By the time the spell concluded, the Codex became hyper-saturated. Composed of more magic than matter, the object became too unstable to remain fixed to the physical realm and vanished into the [[Fanon:Primordial Void|Void]], taking what little remained of Veila along with it.
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-Seeing the fate that befell Veila as a sign, the village leader's hesitance toward returning the Book of Life was substantiated. Soon after, the village leader declare herself the first [[Mayor (Position)|Mayor]] and permanently re-homed the Book of Life in [[Village Hall]] where it would remain guarded by future generations of Mayors. Fearing the power of the Book after the loss of Veila, the first Mayor denied everyone access to the Book. Over time, the true purpose of the Book of Life was forgotten, as its power and abilities were never taught to future generations.
+Seeing the fate that befell Veila as a sign, the village leader's hesitance toward returning the Book of Life was substantiated. Soon after, the village leader declare herself the first [[Mayor (Position)|Mayor]] and permanently re-homed the Book of Life in [[Village Hall]] where it would remain guarded by future generations of Mayors. Fearing the power of the Book after the loss of Veila, the first Mayor denied everyone access to it. Over time, the true purpose of the Book of Life was forgotten, as its power and abilities were never taught to future generations.
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-Beginning to understand the importance of the Book of Life, the village leader instructed everyone to begin construction of [[Creation Hall]] based schematics found within new pages of the Book. This building, once complete, became the sanctuary of the Book of Life and a holy spot of worship for the Raposa settlement. Over time, more pages began to fill the Book, and the Raposa followed the new doctrine understanding it the holy word of the Creator.
+Beginning to understand the importance of the Book of Life, the village leader instructed everyone to begin construction of [[Creation Hall]] based schematics found within new pages of the Book. This building, once complete, became the sanctuary of the Book of Life and a holy spot of worship for the Raposa settlement. Over time, more pages began to fill the Book, and the Raposa followed the new doctrine understanding it as the holy word of the Creator.
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-As the village expanded with new landmarks, Veila and her peers became perplexed by the schematics of a final creation: a wood and iron pedestal the Raposa had constructed at the center of their village. Though the schematics portrayed the box alight with flame, all attempts to kindle a fire within it failed as powerful gusts of wind would soon-after extinguish all efforts. With the village exhausted of ideas, Veila trepidatiously tore the page for fire from the Book of Life and rested it within the pedestal. To the astonishment of her and the village, the page suddenly ignited, burning a brilliant white flame before the crowd that soon thereafter shot into the heavens as a beacon of fire.
+As the village expanded with new landmarks, Veila and her peers became perplexed by the schematics of a final creation: a wood and iron pedestal the Raposa had constructed at the center of their village. Though the schematics portrayed the box alight with flame, all attempts to kindle a fire within it failed as powerful gusts of wind would soon after extinguish all efforts. With the village exhausted of ideas, Veila trepidatiously tore the page for fire from the Book of Life and rested it within the pedestal. To the astonishment of everyone, the page suddenly ignited and burned as a brilliant white flame that soon thereafter shot into the heavens as a beacon of fire.
 === The Eternal Flame ===

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 * Veila created the [[Mecha Baki]] as a means of protecting village crops from pests, however they failed to scare away living [[Baki]] as intended. After Veila's disappearance, Mecha Baki slowly spread from [[Gearworks]] to [[Star Forest]], becoming a threat of their own and evading extermination attempts.
 ** Following The Fall, the few Mecha Baki that remained in the Forest Gate died off once magic levels dropped world-wide.
-* Veila lacks a last name.
+* As a Genesis Raposa, Veila lacks a given last name.
 == {{Icon|Gallery}} Gallery ==

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 {{InfoOC
-  |name        =  Veila
+  |name       =  Veila
   |image      = [[File:IdentityQuest_Veila.png|center|290px]]
   |gender     = Female
   |orientation= {{Tooltip|mastertext=Polyromantic|tooltip=Attracted to many, but not necessarily all genders in a romantic way}} {{Tooltip|mastertext=Asexual|tooltip=Someone who does not experience sexual attraction.}}